Thread: What kills a book for you?
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Old 07-28-2011, 12:16 PM   #234
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Originally Posted by NVash View Post
He spends hours describing everything else, he couldnt take a few more minutes to add some more detail into a fight scene?
Yeah - that's a REALLY good point
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