Here's my suggested edit. Without knowing how important any of the details are to the story, it's hard to know what else might be eliminated to tighten it up further.
I personally wouldn't read the book, as SF is simply not my thing, but I think the blurb sounds pretty interesting.
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Aaron Taylor is a man with nothing left. Thinking the woman he loves _____ [is dead? has disappeared? is gone forever?], he accepts an undercover assignment for the Epsilon Alliance: to head into neutral territory and join the Resistance against the encroaching Drilin Imperium. On the border between two galactic powers, Aaron struggles to forge a new life and identity, and to undo the wrongs done by his father, an Imperium general.
Caren Flannery is the girl Aaron feared he'd lost forever. When she comes back into his life after escaping from Imperium custody, she brings with her some of the Imperium's darkest secrets. They are secrets worth killing for....
Together, these two must find a way to keep themselves--and the greatest leaders of the Resistance--alive. If they fail, all of humanity may pay the price.
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