Thread: Better way to phrase this
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Old 07-21-2011, 01:43 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by kennyc View Post
And if your plot turns on that.....
It's all about character building, innit?

I've gone for this, still a bit clunky but not as bad.

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Colin sighed as he relieved himself, aiming into the toilet bowl itself when the pressure in his bladder reduced and he was no longer able to reach his target.
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