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Old 07-20-2011, 01:36 PM   #1
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Better way to phrase this
It's about someone having a wee wee in the toilet, so don't read it if that sort of thing offends you. It's the bit at the end, when your bladder empties that needs rephrasing, but I'm not sure how to do it.

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Urine spattered against the lid and dripped down it. Colin sighed as he relieved himself, and aimed into the toilet bowl itself when the jet of his stream lessened.
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