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Old 03-25-2008, 09:14 AM   #24
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"Said" replacements are just overused and the result is under effective.

For example, look at your daily conversation. Tell me how many times someone said something airily or exclaimed frustratedly just on the basis of their words? You don't know people are frustrated by their WORDS they say. You know they are frustrated by what they show to you.

And that's one of the key points of writing. Show, don't tell.
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