Quote:
"I can't stand it anymore," John said, slamming the book down on the table.
vs.
"I can't stand it anymore," John exclaimed frustratedly.
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The second reads rather clumsily imho , in other words - to me - it doesn't flow ....
but there would be nothing wrong with :
" I can't stand it anymore ," John exclaimed , and then frustratedly slammed the book down onto the table ."
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