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Originally Posted by PaulineDesigns
The only thing that jumped out at me in the rest of the book was the line below. My grammar sucks (missed all the basic grammar & sentence structure stuff in school) but this sounds wrong and I think either the 'In' OR the 'into' should be removed.
"In the smoke rising out of the fire was forming into an image of "
It's on the last page, fourth paragraph from the end.
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Wow that is bad. Looks like 2 sentences got smashed together some how. GRRR. Not sure how that got by everyone.
I guess cant expect perfection. I will definitely fix that and upload it.
Right now struggling with my hard cover. The proof copy came and the pages are all messed up. Looks like I might have uploaded the paper back template by mistake. GRRR.
