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Old 06-27-2011, 02:12 PM   #38
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Originally Posted by VydorScope View Post
Since Volume II mentions a Volume IV... I would suspect it is in the cards. Was originally planing 5 or 6 in this direct series... not 100% sure on that at this stage. At least four though. Maybe 10 or 15...
LOL, caught me...I obviously skim over everything before the story starts. I'm glad to hear it will go on for at least a few more books.

One thing that stands out for me is that I think you've done an excellent job of introducing the all the story elements. In long books or series it can sometimes be hard to keep track of the details and you always provided enough information to know what was going on (plus just enough extra to enrich it and tie it in to the big picture) without interrupting the flow of the story.

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heh, this thread is so far derailed at this point I dunno that anyone remembers the topic!
Well, I don't think I actually stated an opinion but I agree with mr ploppy and ApK. The kindle-only users probably won't notice and the ones aware of the issues with DRM will know how to handle it. I see you do have a statement about it on the page for the book on your website, and you could do a blog post about it if you wanted to make more of a statement about it.

Incidentally, I like the longer blurb at your website for book one more than the shorter one at Smashwords.

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But thanks! I will look for that, and update it... but not till you finish it at least LOL
I got to read the second half last night--it was really, really good!! I can't wait to not only read the next one to find out what happens next but also reread these two!

The only thing that jumped out at me in the rest of the book was the line below. My grammar sucks (missed all the basic grammar & sentence structure stuff in school) but this sounds wrong and I think either the 'In' OR the 'into' should be removed.
"In the smoke rising out of the fire was forming into an image of "
It's on the last page, fourth paragraph from the end.
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