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Originally Posted by VydorScope
Basically, my editor complains that she missed some stuff because, and she is faithful to remind me, I released it with out giving her "just one more pass through." (for the 9 millionth time mind you). 
I also feel the sentence structure in book one is not as good as in book two, and one of my pre-readers pointed out that my "story telling" was much improved. He felt that book two showed of my talents much better then book one. All of my pre-readers of book two stated it was much better then book one.
Besides.... I assume every author looks at a work and could tweak it forever... I know I do! |
I think that it's a given that the 2nd book in a series will read better than the 1st does because you're breaking new ground with the 1st one. Everything is new rather than being something you have written about before and of course I don't imagine there has ever been an author whose writing doesn't improve with each new book they write either. Haven't started it yet but I did download the 1st book last night. I'm way behind on my reading.
