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Originally Posted by VydorScope
I also feel the sentence structure in book one is not as good as in book two, and one of my pre-readers pointed out that my "story telling" was much improved.
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Well, I knew zip about the book before I started reading it except that it was a sci-fi/fantasy mix. The tone is more formal at the beginning of the book but given that it starts out as pretty straight-up military sci-fi I think it suits the storyline.