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- WAY too long/descriptive sex scenes. Less is more.
- Infodumps.
- "Perfect" characters.
- When a particular area is talked up to be this mystical/super-awesome/storied/*Insert Descriptor Here* place, where gods are forged, the ultimate spells are learned, the iconic weapons are found, etc... and they only spend a couple of pages to describe the events to get there. It's like someone popped in and said "Oh, we're here. It's only a model," and it's quickly forgotten.
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