As far as Whalandria what is the catalyst that makes the story? A natural disaster? Human greed? And how interconnected are the colonists? Are they in constant contact or are they scattered into small groups or clans? Do they even remember Earth anymore or is it a semi-mythical or legendary place that few believe in any more? Those are just a few of the things I'd suggest working on as they might suggest even more ideas for the setting.
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