Thread: User Poetry
View Single Post
Old 05-23-2011, 11:12 AM   #1077
Vandy
...always be humble.
Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.Vandy ought to be getting tired of karma fortunes by now.
 
Vandy's Avatar
 
Posts: 116
Karma: 505917
Join Date: Sep 2010
Location: Fort Myers, FL USA
Device: iPhone 5s, iPod Touch 3rd Gen, Kindle 3 WiFi, Kindle Fire
Spot On!
Hello, crich70.

Your The Christmas Child is spot on! A wonderful poem, well written and excellent use of word imagery and story. Very well done!

Regards,
Vandy is offline   Reply With Quote