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Old 05-23-2011, 10:57 AM   #1075
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Originally Posted by Vandy View Post
Hi, Geoff.

This little untitled piece (above post) is absolutely GREAT! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and LOVED the twist at the end.

It has just enough of a disturbing element (bugs playing under my bed...) to make you shiver at the thought and an absolutely light tone that takes it right over the top of entertainment.

Thanks you for sharing this jewel!

Regards,
I agree with Vandy. It evokes memories of childhood when anything might be about to spring out at you from under the bed or from the closet.
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