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Old 05-23-2011, 10:21 AM   #1073
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Hi, Geoff.

This little untitled piece (above post) is absolutely GREAT! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and LOVED the twist at the end.

It has just enough of a disturbing element (bugs playing under my bed...) to make you shiver at the thought and an absolutely light tone that takes it right over the top of entertainment.

Thanks you for sharing this jewel!

Regards,
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