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Old 05-23-2011, 05:05 AM   #3
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Line sketches are all right, but I think the facial expression is too ambiguous, and the thing in the hand is impossible to identify, which robs the image of the appropriate impact - a weapon, a railing, a candlestick etc. would each lend a different emotional shade to the cover.

As the previous poster said, the text is not sufficiently distinguishable from the drawing and looks a bit cluttered and confusing.
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