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Old 05-20-2011, 03:01 PM   #9
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My advice to authors: keep the book focused in one direction and avoid switching the sceens. Keep the story focused and moving in one direction and avoid moving the time line backwards. Avoid a self contained prelude that does not relate to the story at all. Make chapters as long or as short as you need them to be but the chapters should be the sceen changes.
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