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Old 05-19-2011, 02:33 PM   #1069
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Interesting...

Hi, Geof.

I read through No One? a number of times and seemed to get a different read each time. I must say, your style of "stringing" words together really makes for a thought-provoking read.

There aren't really any "gimmicks" in this piece - just a straight subject handled in an ethereal way. As always, your word imagery is superb.

I must say that the last three lines are giving me the most grief as I contemplate within which I fit -- reveling in the comfort of being aware no one is there or, simply enjoying the comfort that comes from knowing no one is there...

Very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
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