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Old 05-16-2011, 10:15 AM   #1065
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@Vandy The Last Communiqué

I have often-more than often-wished for silence and stillness, Vandy. Your poem would make some think twice of the consequences if those wishes came true, yet I still yearn for them.

Even though my beliefs, or lack of, would not allow this poem to be written, they do not deny me from enjoying it.

Excellent imagery and definitely dark Vandy, although the last sentence may be suggesting a new dawn(ing). I also like that the last sentence is a question.

Thank you for sharing.
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