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Old 05-16-2011, 08:46 AM   #1063
GeoffC
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Originally Posted by Vandy View Post
@Geoff A Rose

Very nice, Geoff. A beautiful description of one of nature's most beautiful flowers. I'm quite interested in the style of the poem. Is the structure one of the "known" poetry styles or, is the structure your own?

Excellent word imagery and great word choices. I really enjoyed this poem.

Rgeards,

Thanks Vandy for your comments ...

The structure is just the way my sub-conscious deemed appropriate as I wrote the poem out ....

" it just worked "
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