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Old 05-16-2011, 08:35 AM   #1062
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@Geoff A Rose

Very nice, Geoff. A beautiful description of one of nature's most beautiful flowers. I'm quite interested in the style of the poem. Is the structure one of the "known" poetry styles or, is the structure your own?

Excellent word imagery and great word choices. I really enjoyed this poem.

Rgeards,
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