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Fredster · 05-08-2011, 03:59 PM

Thanks for the feedback, crich70. I'm struggling with the blurb as we speak. The problem is, with only 6000 words to play with, it's hard to come up with anything that doesn't give many spoilers.

How about:

Kyle Maddox woke up this morning with an amazing new gift: the power to bring physical items back from his dreams. The only problem is, his stepfather Jared knows about it, and wants to use Kyle's ability for his own benefit.

Now Kyle is forced to make a decision that will change their lives forever.

05-08-2011, 03:59 PM	#3
Fredster Junior Member Posts: 5 Karma: 10 Join Date: Apr 2011 Device: Kindle	Thanks for the feedback, crich70. I'm struggling with the blurb as we speak. The problem is, with only 6000 words to play with, it's hard to come up with anything that doesn't give many spoilers. How about: Kyle Maddox woke up this morning with an amazing new gift: the power to bring physical items back from his dreams. The only problem is, his stepfather Jared knows about it, and wants to use Kyle's ability for his own benefit. Now Kyle is forced to make a decision that will change their lives forever. Last edited by Fredster; 05-08-2011 at 04:05 PM.