Originally Posted by Bikeridr
For the "new readers": Being thanked for the review before actally reviewing, derives from the review given by PM 
Here's the "public" review:
As I understand, the story's target group is youth or young adult, but still, as a not-so-very-young adult I still liked the story.
The best continuity is achieved by reading the full trilogy.
The trilogy is best described as -well- the topic of this thread.
I will not go into the story in detail, just give my 4 out of 5 star for readability and formatting. (I have the .mobi version from Smashwords reading on a Kindle). There are a very few formatting errors, especially in book 2 but nothing that derails the story or reading pleasure. (Chapters not "clickable" in book 2). Writing errors are exceptionally few, one have to really look for them.
4 out of 5 stars for the story and plot itself. There are a few places where I "disagree" with the author and another few places where I "disagree" with the character(s). (Of which I won't disclose in order not to send out spoilers).
I have earlier PM'ed a request (and a quick review) to the author of which I got an answer as "a good idea", so time will show what happens next.
 for a good read and quite a few pleasurable hours. |