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Old 04-25-2011, 05:10 AM   #1026
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Originally Posted by Vandy View Post
If I may offer some advice and I hope I am not "stepping on your toes", I think the second stanza would read better something like this:

"See me let go
And fly like an eagle.
The higher I soar
The longer I'm with you...

One day at a time."

Just my thoughts. I really enjoyed this and thank you very much for sharing.

Regards,
No problem.

Actually my toes are vulnerable at the moment because I've been barefoot inside all day and the house is cold - unheated. So stepping on my toes at the moment would be rather painful.

Regards
Caleb
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