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Originally Posted by Vandy
If I may offer some advice and I hope I am not "stepping on your toes", I think the second stanza would read better something like this:
"See me let go
And fly like an eagle.
The higher I soar
The longer I'm with you...
One day at a time."
Just my thoughts. I really enjoyed this and thank you very much for sharing.
Regards,
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No problem.
Actually my toes are vulnerable at the moment because I've been barefoot inside all day and the house is cold - unheated. So stepping on my toes at the moment would be rather painful.
Regards
Caleb