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Cute book! I gave it 3 stars at Amazon and left some editing suggestions there. But the editing inconsistencies do not in any way distract from this cute story. I believe the age group that reads Harry Potter will really like it. As for us older kids, it is tongue-in-cheek humor. And now I finally know what Bubble and Squeak is.
One specific note: The word "maybe" is used incorrectly for "may be" several times.
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