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Old 04-24-2011, 03:03 AM   #5
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Hi Arthur,

I've finished Dust and I really enjoyed it. There's quite a bit to like in this story and the unsettling atmosphere you created in the town of Horseshoe was quite effective.

There are a few errors in the text, but they seem like some sort of format conversion errors. I'm not sure if they're just on my reader, but when I get a chance I'll compile a list and send them to you just in case.

The ending really rushed in unannounced in this book. I felt like the story could have gone for another 100 pages to flesh out the reveals a bit more.

I will write a review some time this week and post it in the usual places.

Regards
Caleb
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