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DixieGal · 04-06-2011, 08:03 AM

I like the way you said it originally. My mind's eye sees it happening, slowly and sensually, connecting in a way that isolates the couple in their own world, oblivious of the gyrating crowd on the dance floor.

Is it getting hot in here?

EDIT: Switch shimmy for "brush"

EDIT: End with " ... No one to push her hips into."

04-06-2011, 08:03 AM	#8
DixieGal Hi There! Posts: 7,473 Karma: 2930523 Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Ft Lauderdale Device: iPad	I like the way you said it originally. My mind's eye sees it happening, slowly and sensually, connecting in a way that isolates the couple in their own world, oblivious of the gyrating crowd on the dance floor. Is it getting hot in here? EDIT: Switch shimmy for "brush" EDIT: End with " ... No one to push her hips into." Last edited by DixieGal; 04-06-2011 at 08:07 AM.