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Old 03-31-2011, 04:23 PM   #90
Elfwreck
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Originally Posted by wvcherrybomb View Post
This woman is just obnoxious and WEIRD.

If she had to put an excerpt reading on You Tube, she could have at least got someone to do it who could actually read seamlessly.

It's funny that she chose a passage where she has some weird sentence structure going on. But since she thinks all of her writing is perfect, I guess it wouldn't have mattered.
From the sample at Smashwords, which is over 30 pages long, there are no passages without weird sentence structure.
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