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Old 03-29-2011, 11:43 AM   #6
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What I found interesting in the author's comments were the poor grammar and misspellings. For example:

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Simply remove this review as it is in error with you not downloading the fresh copy i insisted.
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You never ever returned to me an e-mail
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Besides if you want to throw crap at authors you should first ask their permission if they want it stuck up on the internet via e-mail. That debate is high among authors.
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I want this review removed or its just considered abuse
There are more, but if her comments are any example of her writing style, and considering the examples the reviewer gave of problem sentences, namely,

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"She carried her stocky build carefully back down the stairs."

"Don and Katy watched hypnotically Gino place more coffees out at another table with supreme balance."
I would be hardpressed to say her writing is even good, let alone fine.
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