Worldwalker makes a lot of very good points.
Unless you are one of the best selling authors in the world, a post in this manner will only confuse/reject/piss potential readers. And even if you are, the post still sounds much more like a tv commercial than it should.
My advice: Browse around and take some notes on how people react to various promotional posts.
AND ASK A MODERATOR TO CHANGE THE CAPS LOCK IN THE TITLE, BECAUSE IT IS ANNOYING! (as you can see)
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