Thread: The Second Fly Caster: Opinions Please On Description
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Old 02-16-2011, 05:56 PM   #6
Nada y Nadie
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Something you might want to try is to rewrite your description and keep all the sentences under 10 words, or use some other arbitrary constraint (like no comma usage, or every sentence has to start with a preposition...). What this does is force you to be creative in your writing and try something you wouldn't usually do. It may not give you your final draft, but I'll bet you'll come up with a description that is quite different from what you have now. Then you can synthesize the two.
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