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ASparrow · 02-06-2011, 01:03 PM

A new, improved version of PEREGRIN has been uploaded to Smashwords, courtesy of some comments of astute readers at http://Page99test.com. 10 out of 12 users said they would turn the page, despite some awkward phrasing and some overuse of a character's name in the sentence structures. I've taken the opportunity to revamp an entire chapter.

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/20932

It never ceases to how blind a writer can be to the flaws of her own writing. Updates like these make me rest easier, though I know little bombs still lurk in my prior works. That's why I keep writing new stuff. (Four chapters left before 'final' edits begin on my latest book - "Sonant").

02-06-2011, 01:03 PM	#6
ASparrow Addict Posts: 355 Karma: 600000 Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Boston Device: Palm TX	A new, improved version of PEREGRIN has been uploaded to Smashwords, courtesy of some comments of astute readers at http://Page99test.com. 10 out of 12 users said they would turn the page, despite some awkward phrasing and some overuse of a character's name in the sentence structures. I've taken the opportunity to revamp an entire chapter. https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/20932 It never ceases to how blind a writer can be to the flaws of her own writing. Updates like these make me rest easier, though I know little bombs still lurk in my prior works. That's why I keep writing new stuff. (Four chapters left before 'final' edits begin on my latest book - "Sonant").