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Old 01-28-2011, 07:01 AM   #18
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Well, I just read Trapped.....it was very underwhelming. It wasn't as disgusting as you might thing, and it jumps around....ALOT, to the point that it doesn't makes sense sometimes.

I could see why the publisher hated it....it's not the violence.....it's the poor story.

I will be honest and say that I did read this in just about one sitting, it was far from boring, and had alot of action.

But when reflecting on the story it was A.) Predictable B.) Convoluted C.) Things just "happened" to be all setup in the right place and the right time.

There was only one part that made me go "oh wow, that would be painful" and it had to do with a "gridiron" and I'm not talking about the football field.
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