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Old 01-25-2011, 03:20 AM   #2
Worldwalker
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I find summaries with questions in them to be an instant turn-off. I can't pin down exactly why, but they are a deal breaker.

Also, why is she searching for her grandmother? Some more clarity there would really improve the description.
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