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Honestly, the whole super power, then killing him and then having him come back to exact revenge against the main character sounds like a bad idea. The story does not seem to have a central theme to pivot around, but instead is two books. Whatever leads her to realize that she must kill him should be the climax, and the act itself and the changes it makes in her should be the conclusion. If you want him to come back, leave that for the sequel.
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