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Well ... do you have to write in the present tense, third person?
Even if you do, initially write it in whatever tense and person works best for you, then convert it.
Also, you need to put spaces after commas and periods, understand the difference between a sole and a soul, learn what semicolons do (hint: not what you're making them do!), and stop doing that thing with the comma splices. Frankly, if your post is any example of your writing, you're not ready for a synopsis yet.
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