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Old 01-17-2011, 11:53 PM   #10
Steven Lake
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In regards to your english, you did a good job. In fact, you did about as good as some of us native speakers. Some days even we can't speak proper English! lol. Now as for your idea about the dog tricking the wolf into helping him with the sheep, when I read your description it immediately jumped out at me and grabbed my attention. If you haven't already worked that into a book, you really should! I mean, if you can do a little blurb like that and snag me hook, line and sinker, then you know you have a great idea! The only trick now is converting it into a working story!
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