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bhartman36 · 01-03-2011, 09:56 AM

Hi, Everyone.

I have published a short story, "Last Call", to Smashwords. It's free to download and read, in multiple formats. (I haven't decided if I'm going to submit it for magazines or short story prizes yet, and I'm really looking for some feedback.)

Please have a read and let me know what you think (although if you really think it's a piece of crap, I'd appreciate that kind of feedback in PM, rather than in the open

).

Last Call

01-03-2011, 09:56 AM	#1
bhartman36 Wizard Posts: 1,323 Karma: 1515835 Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: New Jersey, USA Device: Kobo Libra Colour, Kindle Paperwhite Signature Edition (2021)	"Last Call" - a short story (FREE on Smashwords) Hi, Everyone. I have published a short story, "Last Call", to Smashwords. It's free to download and read, in multiple formats. (I haven't decided if I'm going to submit it for magazines or short story prizes yet, and I'm really looking for some feedback.) Please have a read and let me know what you think (although if you really think it's a piece of crap, I'd appreciate that kind of feedback in PM, rather than in the open ). Last Call Last edited by bhartman36; 01-03-2011 at 05:47 PM.