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Old 01-03-2011, 09:56 AM   #1
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"Last Call" - a short story (FREE on Smashwords)

Hi, Everyone.

I have published a short story, "Last Call", to Smashwords. It's free to download and read, in multiple formats. (I haven't decided if I'm going to submit it for magazines or short story prizes yet, and I'm really looking for some feedback.)

Please have a read and let me know what you think (although if you really think it's a piece of crap, I'd appreciate that kind of feedback in PM, rather than in the open ).

Last Call

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