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Old 12-30-2010, 01:34 PM   #19
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Seems to me you asked them for too much and perhaps invited rejection.

Maybe consider hiring a professional editor to whip your m/s into shape. Change the title, if only to separate the new, improved model from the old one, and try again.

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