Thread: What gems could be found in an underground pond or river?
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Old 12-20-2010, 03:16 PM   #15
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Originally Posted by AndrewH View Post
I would consider re-writing this. 'The truly amazing detail' is too much like an 'as you know Bob' speech.
The cave interior sparkled like tiny stars, the quartz in the walls brightly reflecting the glowing light of the underground flora and fauna.
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