The series of caves there in is completely untouched by anyone, so hidden treasure won't work for the story line. The idea is to have a cave that is sparkly. *grin* This is what I wrote (note: the insects and plants are bio-luminescent) ---
A few minutes later he found a good sized cave with a river running through it. The truly amazing detail about the cave was that it sparkled brightly in the glowing light of the underground flora and fauna. The sparkling effect came from quartz crystals that filled the right side of the cave.
“Ohh, pretty,” Vevin said appreciatively from behind them. It really was beautiful. Insects and tiny birds flitted about the cave, many landing on the crystals. Every little movement made little dots of light dance around the cave. It all seemed so alive.
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