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lene1949 · 12-20-2010, 02:36 AM

I'm just reading your book, and whereas I love the story, there are too many mistakes, missing words, words cut in two, and formatting issues..

There are also problems with change of scenarios, as there are no breaks to suggest we're now in a different area or time.

It's a large book and a good book, and you should probably have invested in an editor...

12-20-2010, 02:36 AM	#3
lene1949 Wizard Posts: 1,952 Karma: 213930 Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Middelfart, Denmark Device: Kindle paper white	I'm just reading your book, and whereas I love the story, there are too many mistakes, missing words, words cut in two, and formatting issues.. There are also problems with change of scenarios, as there are no breaks to suggest we're now in a different area or time. It's a large book and a good book, and you should probably have invested in an editor...