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Originally Posted by speedtouch
I finally got around to checking our your story. Sorry it has taken me so long. I read it last night before going to bed and thoroughly enjoyed it. The way the robot formed was very imaginative. I hope you'll consider expanding this story into more detail, especially the robot and what it's "thinking" and of the main character and his quest he launches into at the end of the story. Good job, ChupaLibro. I look forward to more.
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No worries! Thanks for taking the time to read it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I agree, there is definitely more expansion that could be done on the story. That's one of challenges of the short story format, striking a balance between the details and moving the plot forward. You never know, I may return to this "universe" in the future.
Shameless plug time: you can check out my latest story, "Unnatural Time",
here.
And again...
