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Old 12-11-2010, 02:41 PM   #65
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Originally Posted by erictoma View Post
I was asking you some English help to rewrite my post.
Anyway thank a lot
All right, I will gladly try to help you with this as well, if I can, but please understand that I am not an English teacher! So, these are just a few of my suggestions and others here might be better qualified to help you.

"Sony 300 doesn't have a good contrast."
In my opinion, the Sony 300 doesn't have very good contrast.
In my opinion, contrast on the Sony 300 isn't very good.

"Sony 300 doesn't have a built in dictionary."
The Sony 300 doesn't have a built-in dictionary.

"Sony 300 doesn't have the pearl screen technology."
The Sony 300 doesn't use E Ink Pearl technology.
The Sony 300 doesn't have an E Ink Pearl display.
The Sony 300 doesn't have an E Ink Pearl screen.

"Kindle is by far better than any Sony eReader. One guy wanted to sell a PRS600 for 80 dollars, i did want to buy it. I didn't like their touch screen concept , I don't like really their weird pen !"
The Kindle 3 is far better than any Sony e-reader. One guy was selling a PRS-600 for 80 dollars and I was interested in buying it. However, I didn't like the concept of a touch-screen, or the pen, which I think is really weird.

"All Sony eReaders are badly designed, cold, strange colors."
I think all Sony e-readers are badly designed, they feel cold to me and I find the choice of colors strange.

"I like so much Kindle 3, the smartest ereader i have even see."
I like the Kindle 3 very much. I think it is the smartest e-reader that I have ever seen.

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