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Old 11-28-2010, 06:53 AM   #10
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Sorry, Altoanto, but the plot had no incest and I found no mention of the Turin Shroud and a mysterious brotherhood who control the destiny of the universe.

I would suggest a rewrite, but that would be presumptuous and impugn your artistic integrity ...
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