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Vandy · 11-11-2010, 08:20 AM

First and foremost, thank you Keny and Geoff for your kind words as well as the Karma (I assume since it skyrocketed up!) It is always a pleasure to bring a smile or warm a heart.

"Mama's Grave"

How wonderful -- a heart-wrenching and "grab you by the shorts" piece. A wonderful tribute to your mother.

I do like the word images you've used. They are quite "real" and bring the reader right to the gravesite with you.

I am especially fond of your last stanza. What thoughts, what visions those word images conjur up.
Excellent poem, Kenny. Thank you for sharing this and your vulerability.

Regards,

11-11-2010, 08:20 AM	#917
Vandy ...always be humble. Posts: 116 Karma: 505917 Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Fort Myers, FL USA Device: iPhone 5s, iPod Touch 3rd Gen, Kindle 3 WiFi, Kindle Fire	Comments... First and foremost, thank you Keny and Geoff for your kind words as well as the Karma (I assume since it skyrocketed up!) It is always a pleasure to bring a smile or warm a heart. "Mama's Grave" How wonderful -- a heart-wrenching and "grab you by the shorts" piece. A wonderful tribute to your mother. I do like the word images you've used. They are quite "real" and bring the reader right to the gravesite with you. I am especially fond of your last stanza. What thoughts, what visions those word images conjur up. Excellent poem, Kenny. Thank you for sharing this and your vulerability. Regards, Last edited by Vandy; 11-11-2010 at 08:45 AM.