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Old 11-10-2010, 12:42 PM   #308
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"This bid is now in a formal process so we have to play by the rules. Of which Jeff is a master at."

First, the last 'sentence' ends in a preposition, and really is a description of the word rules, so would be better with a comma. The 'of which' makes this into a clause, not a full on sentence, and it needs to be tied to a sentence.


"This bid is now in a formal process so we have to play by the rules, of which Jeff is a master."

I hope this was an internal memo, which could account for a slightly less formal style.
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