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Old 11-08-2010, 07:02 PM   #40
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One thing that would help critiquers get a handle on what they are reading would be a short text field where the the author, in a few sentences could set the stage for their excerpt, tell the reader whether these were major or minor characters, whether this is an action scene or the calm between events, back story or front story. Some of my reviewers seem to be very misguided by what they read, understandably.
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