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Old 11-08-2010, 02:22 PM   #26
William Campbell
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Originally Posted by GraceKrispy View Post
I just finished this-- a fun, easy read with a matrix-y feel. I reviewed it on my blog. It will be interesting to see what happens next in the series....
Great review, Grace, thank you. And my first on Smashwords. At last! Thank you for that as well. I was starting to wonder if I'd ever get a review there.

I particularly like reviews like yours that are balanced -- the good and the bad. Gives more credibility to the work, unlike reviews that gush about the amazingly incredible story (yawn). It's just a book. Nice job with the honest assessment. I super appreciate that.

Also, I was pleased that you noticed my transition scheme with the dreams. It's always a joy when a reader remarks on something we consciously work toward. Since first-person lacks the third-person ploy of switching to another character, leaving the last one hanging, the dreams serve to attain a measure of that without violating the more restrictive perspective.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I'm sure you will enjoy the rest of the series. Book 2 is available and 3 is close to done. Off to my editor at month's end and looks like a January release (fingers crossed).

Thanks again, I really like the review. I will post a link elsewhere (Facebook, etc.) and point others to your blog URL.

Best regards, William
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