ASparrow: Awesome! Keep working on it, because it only gets better from here so long as you keep at it. I'm going to look forward to the day when you reach the point that you can write "off the cuff" with such quality that it only takes a handful of edits to have it ready to go to the editor. I myself am not there yet, but I'm still working towards that goal. It'll be fun though when we're both at that point.
